WRITTEN ON November 25th, 2010 BY admin AND STORED IN Poetry
Tags: Act, Honey, Poem, Show Me The Money
Powy asked:
Love is a Game
Come Kiss me honey
Come and show me the money
Are you buying me a dress
Or diamond ring
I love you
And you love me
Come sit on the couch
Do not be shy
Touch me as you wish
Act like big boy
But gentleman
Remember there is
Some boundary
And some limits
So come have some romance
And tell me again
Are you buying me a dress
or a diamond ring?
Love is a Game
Come Kiss me honey
Come and show me the money
Are you buying me a dress
Or diamond ring
I love you
And you love me
Come sit on the couch
Do not be shy
Touch me as you wish
Act like big boy
But gentleman
Remember there is
Some boundary
And some limits
So come have some romance
And tell me again
Are you buying me a dress
or a diamond ring?
Come and show me the money
I will replace by”
“m your bunny”
I am your bunny
Overall it’s good.
Rhyming honey / money is a bit cliche.
Rock on though.